It is a fact
that most of the time school stories started and ended with characters like Billy
Bunter and writers like Enid Blyton. Not so many famous school stories series have
had been in circulation, and in India it is almost naught. Ruskin Bond writes
about children, however most of his stories are based in the hills with vagrant
child protagonists. Recently from India and for Indians, Duckbill publisher has
started a school story series called ‘The Hill School Girls’. These stories
will have girl(s) as a protagonist. From the series ‘Alone’ is the first book. Let’s
see how it goes up.
The book kicks
up with a reticent character, Elizabeth. She is bit depresses because her
current school is going to be a holistic school where children will be allowed
to do lot of interactive things and the whole of the management is changing as
well. But she is afraid to embrace this modernity. Due to changes in school,
many parents have already pulled out their children. One such student is
Pallavi, the best friend of Elizabeth. Without her being around, she is sure to
have the worst time of her schooling.
Soon, four
girls including Elizabeth start on a recipe project. In the process they
discover the roots of the school, who founded it etc., and one of the precious journal-cum-recipe
books go missing from her bag. From there the story starts to unravel the
mystery behind that lost journal.
The plot of
the story is likeable: a stormy term at school for the lonely protagonist that
ends with her making new friends. Other characters like Maitreyi, Mahrukh and
the moody principal Palak Nanda are apt with their settings. However weak
points prevent this book from becoming a classic, beloved school story. First, the
characters are not given enough depth or detail for readers to know about them.
How can any reader love or hate someone they hardly know? Secondly, the
protagonist Elizabeth comes across as a moaning, self-pitying well-behaved rather
than a lonely heartsick girl. For instance, not replying to any of one's best
friend's mails for a whole term just because one is sad, just rude. Also, the
mystery was too simple, with no layers of conspiracy to uncover. Recommended
for 9-11 year olds. Girls will enjoy it more than boys, but will not recommend
it only for girls since children should be introduced to Indian books by Indian
authors as well, and an Indian school story.
i like it
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